BrendenOLoughlin

Second half of chapter one is finally posted, thank you to anyone following. It's a hard draft and updated for it as well as the prologue and first half of the chapter will be coming soon. I've included a preview to Chapter Two at the bottom.

BrendenOLoughlin

Second half of chapter one is finally posted, thank you to anyone following. It's a hard draft and updated for it as well as the prologue and first half of the chapter will be coming soon. I've included a preview to Chapter Two at the bottom.

arlenequinnreads

Thank you for the follow! Your story looks quite interesting, so I've added it to my library. I'll start reading it ASAP. :)

arlenequinnreads

@BrendenOLoughlin I know exactly what you mean. When I first started writing Eye Enchanters, my first three chapters were utter disasters! I recently went back and rewrote the first chapter and added a prologue, which has really helped retain new readers. 
            
            I can't wait to read all of your updates when I get back! I hope you also have a great summer, all the best!
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BrendenOLoughlin

@ilylily112 Oh and loved your Eye Enchanter's story as well. It seems so far very unique and very good! I've added it to the library as well and can't wait to read more. Also, I'll be updating my Novel with the second half of Chapter One on Sunday with a preview to Chapter Two as well. But you'll be gone for the summer so hopefully I'll have a lot more finished when you get back! Thanks again for comment and hopefully you have a good break!
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BrendenOLoughlin

@ilylily112 Thank you! and you're welcome. I'll be posting updates to it on the regular, hopefully it'll turn out as well as I'd like it to. It's the first story I've written so every Chapter my writing gets a little better so I feel like the story is starting to pick up the further you progress. I have some good ideas for this story and can't wait to post more! :))
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BrendenOLoughlin

First half of Chapter One has been posted and the next half will be posted in a few days as well as a preview to Chapter Two. Over the next day or two, I will also be making changes to any typos or mistakes in Chapter One, as well as possibly adding some content and reducing "info dumps". I hope if anyone reads this, that they enjoy it.
          The story really begins in Chapter One, so if the Prologue is overly descriptive or too "slow" for you. Please give chapter one a chance! :))