_ShadowBolt_
Hi I read your Mike Chang story and it's fantastic. The only problem is that it's hard to follow because there's no periods, commas, capitals and things like that. The book is great as story but there's needs to be some editing with the punctuations. I'm not criticizing on how you do things, I'm just suggesting that if you need help with putting punctuations in the story I can help you out.