Candy1736
Omfg, i thought i’d never see “insatiable” by leigh rivers anymore. At first i heard this story from Tiktok and it was said to be very well written. It was just a wattpad story at that time.
As a reader, I was interested and took on this to try it for myself, i had no idea how long had i read, the time i read probably was around last year or this year, i think?(around summer). It was quite spicy at first but the plot kinda bores me later on, and it also hurt my eyes to read in dark mode too much so i stopped and never checked again.
It wasn’t that well written for me.. as the frustration and cringeness with some parts of it got to me. Either way it was a fine 3/5 for me on average.
As far as i remember, i remember the plot that fl met the guy in a party, near the pool? And then they were now exes, they started hooking up cuz they couldn’t stop it bla bla.. maybe i left it off where they almost fcked but stopped and the dude decided to sat down the car and had a call with his dad (that’s how I remember ut).
Now when i checked for the update of the story and IT WAS GONE, NEVER SEEN IT AGAIN LMAO. I JUST FOUND OUT IN THE COMMENTS THAT IT WAS MADE INTO A BOOK, i was like.. whaaat, that’s krezy, and looked it up (it’s true, I didn’t expect the author to be a scientist and i was partly excited for the author) even tho i dont enjoy their writing and plot that much, it kinda fun,i was hoping for the best outcome.
Either way I might not buy the book but will download it on kindle just to see the ending, <3
Candy1736
Oh btw while i read. I might not have good memories to remember everything from the gate scenes to fl and her sick not blood brother. But i do know when the details got changed and it was obvious.
The author must have added more chapters about flashbacks in between and added more unnecessary scenes and dialogues, (i could be wrong)
I remember the first time i read, after almost fck her and reminded about the woman named B, Kade (ml) ran outside from the hotel/whatever and went to his car to make a call to his dad.
Yet in the published version, the author added more scene in between like before showing him in the car, the author added flashbacks about their past which is cool (I haven’t able to read much about their past in wattpad version) and even make fl came out to check on him (a detail that I didn’t remember happening at all in the first version. I might skimming through cuz im too lazy to read those extra moments. But so far it good.
I especially despise the plot tho, the same trope over and over, MISCOMMUNICATIONS X MALE LEAD FCK OTHER GIRLS OVER AND OVER AGAIN TO FORGET IT. (And make fl jealous).
+It so fcked up in many ways, it definitely won’t past my line irl, like nope nope nope. Toxic as hell (glad that author didn’t romanize it, wait.. did she?)
+Second-chances aint my thing, once an ex, always an ex, so yeah that’s why i left this on and didn’t pick it up for so long to notice it was gone.
+If they both shjtty, it fine, but if one of them innocent and suffer cuz the other misunderstood? Nah that’s emotional abuse for both the character and reader, i wanna burn down any Author that went with the CH style or HAdeline style