CarterWalker22

I would greatly appreciate continued feedback on the story I posted, whether it's a message here, a comment in the chapter, or a message to me personally. Doing this allows me to see you're engaged in the story and have ideas you want to see come true.i will be responding to every comment, so please feel free to shoot your wackiest ideas here, and if i like the idea, I'll add it to the story.

LunaUzumakiNamikaze

I added your story to my reading lists. I initially started to read it but stopped a couple of weeks ago, maybe a month. However, after seeing it in my recommendations, I decided to start reading it again. And I can tell that although there are few chapters so far, you are doing your best to write a wonderful story. My only recommendations would be to update at your speed. Don't feel pressured to update consistently. If you are writing a new chapter and you feel as though it doesn't mesh well with what you have so far, reread what you have done so far and go from there. Rewrite the chapter if you have to. And to have at least one copy of your story in case it somehow gets deleted off of Wattpad. Many authors have had that happen to them and were unable to reproduce that story they lost because they didn't have at least one copy of it. Not me, thankfully, but you can never be too careful, ya know? Anyways, keep up the good work, and don't overwork yourself. Stay healthy.

LunaUzumakiNamikaze

@CarterWalker22 No problem. Take your time. School does take precedence anyways.
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CarterWalker22

@SerenityTsukino4 Hey thanks for the review. Unfortunately I have to focus my time on something else as I am writing the mcats in September. I will def try to get the story out asap, but writer's block and mcat prep have been massive clouds in my life so far. But thanks for your feedback and love for the story
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CarterWalker22

I would greatly appreciate continued feedback on the story I posted, whether it's a message here, a comment in the chapter, or a message to me personally. Doing this allows me to see you're engaged in the story and have ideas you want to see come true.i will be responding to every comment, so please feel free to shoot your wackiest ideas here, and if i like the idea, I'll add it to the story.