Red_DemonHood

I read your story and it was really interesting!! I loved it but... I am not trying to be mean but I just thought like you could make a new paragraph each time a new person talks. And make it more organized.. HEY! But it's up to you, it's just hard for me to read. But overall it wa really interesting!

Chiharu-Q

I'll try to make some change!Thank you!!
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