ClementineCavill

Hey everyone, I hope all is going well. I know a lot of you liked my book La Malavita the first time around and I am pleased to announce that it will be making a comeback soon. I am editing and reworking the story a bit to make it more coherent and easier to read for all of you. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed creating it. PS. it will be more brutal than before so strap in! *winks*

ClementineCavill

@Siennafrost  It is crazy! But I think all of them would work, which is even crazier! I've rewritten a particular chapter for like four times already. Sometimes the story just wants to have its own way and get out of control. I can't let that happen, but it's also fun to explore different routes the characters might have taken. So many drafts! *sighs*
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Siennafrost

@ClementineCavill but I think in terms of context, your opening is down! Just the little details. No need to fret too much at all. You’ve got a great voice. That’s plenty to hook people.
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Siennafrost

@ClementineCavill lol you do NOT want to know how many times I’ve rewritten (no not edited, rewritten) chapter one from scratch. It’s so hard to figure out when to begin the story. I’ve begun with the birth of Djari, I‘ve begun with Hasheem and Djari when they’ve already been together for years. I’ve even begun with Lasura’s son generation! Then Hasheem on a run in the desert, then suicide, then this epilogue you are seeing now!!! It’s crazy!
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ClementineCavill

Hey everyone, I hope all is going well. I know a lot of you liked my book La Malavita the first time around and I am pleased to announce that it will be making a comeback soon. I am editing and reworking the story a bit to make it more coherent and easier to read for all of you. I hope you'll enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed creating it. PS. it will be more brutal than before so strap in! *winks*

ClementineCavill

@Siennafrost  It is crazy! But I think all of them would work, which is even crazier! I've rewritten a particular chapter for like four times already. Sometimes the story just wants to have its own way and get out of control. I can't let that happen, but it's also fun to explore different routes the characters might have taken. So many drafts! *sighs*
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Siennafrost

@ClementineCavill but I think in terms of context, your opening is down! Just the little details. No need to fret too much at all. You’ve got a great voice. That’s plenty to hook people.
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Siennafrost

@ClementineCavill lol you do NOT want to know how many times I’ve rewritten (no not edited, rewritten) chapter one from scratch. It’s so hard to figure out when to begin the story. I’ve begun with the birth of Djari, I‘ve begun with Hasheem and Djari when they’ve already been together for years. I’ve even begun with Lasura’s son generation! Then Hasheem on a run in the desert, then suicide, then this epilogue you are seeing now!!! It’s crazy!
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Promise2LoveMe

Hello! :) Thank you so much for voting for AFMW. It means the world to me. Oh, BTW I love Debby Ryan too!!! <3

Promise2LoveMe

@FreakyFrenky Thanks so much!!! <3
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ClementineCavill

@Promise2LoveMe Lol yes haha:)  Well I look forward to it :-*
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Promise2LoveMe

@FreakyFrenky I think I do! lol. I look forward to finding time to read yours as well. More AFMW to come, as well as another novel I just have to put on paper. ;)
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