CrystalKaitlyn

Chapter 17 is up <3

landosleftshoe

Hey I just posted the first chapter of my first book. If you don't mind could you check it out and maybe give me some feedback? If not that's ok. ❤️

CrystalKaitlyn

I love your book so far! As feedback, I think it would be good if you focused on improving your grammar <3 It’s something I need to work on too and it really makes people’s work sound so much better! Make sure to check out my book as well ‼️ 
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CrystalKaitlyn

Hey guys! Long time no see! Sorry that i’ve gone MIA but I promise you that I’m back for good now. I’ve looked over all my books and changed them a bit. Some things just weren’t working for me and they needed to be fixed. 
          
          Feel free to give me any sort of feedback :)