Skye & Raven Darkheart

Skye: Hey guys! I have recently gotten into critiquing and am open to critiquing anyone's work that would like me too. Just message us and I'd be more than happy to read your story :) One thing I am studying in school is plot building and structure of a story. I found that I can spot strong and weak points in a story's plot and such sorts. 
All I ask in return is a read and comment from you on one of our 2 stories we are currently working on, which shouldn't be to hard right? Haha.

Raven:
Writing is a passion. You never truly understand the feeling until you have your own words written down and you've become somewhat attached to the characters which you've created. They become your family, your children, you can't really bear to part with them. And the plot becomes your life. You just get so wrapped up in your own little world that all the problems in reality seem ridiculous, unimportant. You jet lost in your own mind as you unravel the lives of your characters, deciding their fates. There really isn't a thrill quite like writing your own story. It's just a way to lose yourself in fantasy, and you never quite come back from it. Some part of every story sticks with you always. It becomes a part of you that you never want to let go of.

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Hello to all! We are both young, aspiring authors and shoot to please all that read our many adventures. The books we have posted are ones that we plan on publishing so sadly, the whole novel will not be posted. We've been writing since our minds could imagine and we plan on continuing it throughout our lives. 

Twitter: https://twitter.com/R_Darkhearts_S
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/TheDarkheartSisters
Website: http://thedarkheartsisters.webnode.com
Email: thedarkheartsisters@gmail.com

We are welcome to business inquires too :)
Also looking to team up with any YouTubers that do book reviews. So, hit us up if you're interested!