David Gilmore

@realpeal Oh, one other thing, while I could use more readers for The Deadlands with it being a work in progress (I can't exactly change the published bits much at all), I'd recommend you check out Gus or To Take A Life rather than the work in progress.

@realpeal You're most welcome and thanks for following back. Just sorry I'm not much help with content feedback. I've done line editing, you see, and very much have a technical mind. Content I find too subjective as well, unless something doesn't make sense or it's awful, so I tend to stay clear of it and well . . . technical feedback, I tend to prefer doing that privately and I'd be thorough, so it'd be a bit hard to do on here via the comment section.

@PrincePegasus No problem. Thank you for following back. :)

No rush, worries, and thanks for following back. :) Gus is what I'd recommend, not because I think The Deadlands is poor (you've read some of it anyway), but I think I have a lot to offer with Gus, plus it's finished and short. Can't tweak any of it based on feedback though with being published. With you being a teacher though, I'm not sure you'd need the technical feedback I offered, though I know we all miss things.

No problem, thanks for following back. :) I meant what I said on the board. I'm a bit busy and here to ply my wares, I guess, but if you do want any technical help, do feel free to ask.

@David_Gilmore Okay sorry for the delay, not everything winds up properly in my email.
            
            Going to look now ;)

@MetisRebel You're most welcome, and thanks for following me back. :) Not sure if you have, but with you liking a story about homeless people the other day, you might want to check out Gus. It's complete, only 1,750 words. Not about homeless people though, but it does offer social commentary.

@manomalik666 Done.