Desmondthemoonbear55

@heyyits_ashley8 a new chapter should be coming out this weekend!!! I'm so exited to see what you think. Considering you are like one of the only people that ever gives meh feedback!

heyyits_ashley8

yeah sure ill read yours :) and i kinda changed the plot of my story because i saw nobody was reading it so its kinda mixed up right now but its suppous to be about a boy and a girl starting off as friends and the boy is trying to fix her and her broken life with her dad and all. lol i changed what is was supposed to be originally about so im working on it sorry haha

Desmondthemoonbear55

@heyyits_ashley8 what's your story about? Just asking I kidda don't get it! I want to read it but what is it about. But don't ever stop writing I mean look at my story's only my best friend really reads them. So don't stop. I would really be happy if you read my story The sneakers and tell me what you think. I would be nice for a new opinion( not just my best friend's)

jellyforever23

The eyes see.
          Your secrets lost.
          You have the key to the lock.
          If you do not help, you'll forever be torn. 
          The truth is always hidden.
          The other side is never green. 
          you'll suffer in silence 
          And feel the pain of lost love. 
          Remember, Your life can be taken by the promises. 
          The clock strikes 12 by day 3.
          There I'll wait to watch the sunset. 
          
          -Riley