hikariwrites019

grace falls in love with a popular guy cameron  ,they both met for a purpose and Destined by the universe ,
          The sparks of love light up between them like 
          Waves of the ocean , attraction as that of shades of sunrise, 
          And chemistry like lavender lightening  before the thunder ,
          But this is not the ending ,this is the starting
          Of a love story of two ,like the sun and the moon they are drifted for 372 days ,how 
          They loved each other ? Will they reunite?
          Did Cameron really love her ? Will grace be able to find Celestia? Who's the Celestia?
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/357603986?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=hikariwrites019https://www.wattpad.com/story/357603986?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=hikariwrites019

Lucalee27

Hi Dora!
          
          I just finished reading your story: Love after Marriage. What a quick one it was. The pace at which the narrative unfolds took me by surprise. I didn't expect it to be so fast and frankly short. It's uh, straight to the point. I think that's how I'd describe it; and a good read.
          
          I couldn't help but feel like I was listening to somebody tell me the story of how they found love after marriage over a cup of coffee. It didn't feel like I was reading a book. I can tell that a lot of details were left out and some questions answered, but you seem to have included enough to keep the story moving. I kind of wish the story had a bit of depth in it, you know, a chance for the audience to really get to know the character and build a relationship with them. But I guess there's a reason why you decided to go about the articulation of your ideas the way you did. After all, You good the number one spot in the short story ranking (so, you must have done something right!)
          
          Bravo to that! Your style of writing is uh, um... different. I guess that's what makes your story stand out. 
          
          Keep writing!

Mindful_Imaginist

Excerpt from my new short story:
          
          "Smile for me, Cherry," he urged with a mix of command and desperation. The woman met his gaze with lifeless eyes, mechanically stretching her lips into a semblance of a smile.
          Frustrated, he insisted on a "proper smile," emphasizing his desperation and command. As her lips widened, the hollowness in her eyes sent a shiver down his spine.
          With a hushed realization, he whispered, "It's like you're dead."
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/361675231?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Mindful_Imaginist
          
            It's been an exciting journey so far, and I'd love it if you could check it out and be a part of my writing adventure.