Dustlesss

A new poem was published, which took 6 seconds to read!!!! But there is a huge meaning in the poem!!! You should read it...

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Hi guys! Are you ready for the new poem? 

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İt's on the way!!!!
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Dustlesss

I NEED HELP LAST TIME PLS
          Which poem is better understood?
          
          1. I CAN'T TELL YOU
          
          I can't tell you
          My heart was a sea ready to flood 
          The waves are getting grumpy
          It touched my cheeks
          You were spilled in piece
          It's like... like... How do I know?
          I couldn't tell
          
          2.I COULD NOT DESCRIBE YOU
          I could not describe you. 
          Yet, my heart was a sea ready to overflow 
          The waves got more and more peevish 
          They kept hitting my cheeks 
          You spilled in pieces
          It's like ...like how do I know
          I couldn't describe somehow...
          

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@ Dustlesss  thanks
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isax2002

I like the second one better, they are both very good tho❤️
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Dustlesss

Hello dear readers! I mentioned before that I shared my poems in translation. Now I want to do a little survey. Could you please write which poem is more understandable?
          
          1. YOU
          Every when you came to my mind.  
          Your light is wrapping my heart
          You know there's no shadow at all?
          At all...
          
          2. YOU
          Whenever you come to my mind
          Your light embraces my heart
          And you know something? There are no shadows
          None
          

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Dustlesss

                  I NEED HELP
          Hello dear readers! I mentioned before that I shared my poems in translation. Now I want to do a little survey. Could you please write which poem is more understandable?
          
          1. LOST 
          
          It was the only deciduous leaf in the spring.
          It never loved the burning sun or stubborn wind.
          It never admired the stars or the rainbow.
          
          It choosed not to love anything.
          It never wanted to conflagrate or persevere 
          Also never ascribed a meaning to night or blob.
          
          It let it self go. It percolated and landed on the soil.
          It rustle was pretty thick 
          And it couldn't call autumn because it go lost.
          
          2. LOST
          
          It was the only leaf that spilled in spring 
          Had neither loved the burning sun nor stubborn wind 
          Had neither admired the stars nor the rainbow
          It had chosen not to love 
          Neither wanted to burn nor resist 
          Neither to add meaning to the night nor the trace of water
           Let itself go, glided and perched on the ground
          With a silent rustle 
          Disappeared before it could call autumn  
           THANK YOU!
          

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hwananana

@Dustlesss 
                 2 is wonderful. and more understandable for me to say the least.
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@ Dustlesss  okay thanks
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