Hiya, Freya :)
I'm always searching for really great new gems to promote and came across yours.
I would love (and most wattpadders would be thrilled) if each of the 18 chapters were broken up into a separate sections. Here are instructions how to do that:
To upload a story is very simple.
Go to the main page, and open the drop down menu next to your name. Select "my works". Click the "New story" in the upper right hand corner. The rest should be easy from there.
After that, you can open my works and click the "new chapter" button to the right hand side of the story to add more parts
Excerpt taken form a Community Help Discussion.
I'm certain you will attract more readers/fans and comments!
Also, during a scan through, it appears that you may have copied and pasted from MS Word. There are many pages in which it seems like a very long paragraph. The formats of Word & wattpad are different, but I think you were aware of that, because some of the pages do have the appropriate spacing between paragraphs :)
Feel free to REPLY to this comment to tag a message back to me or Click my Pic to send me a PM or post on my board if you have any questions or need any further assistance!
*Myztikal*
