pmataliah16
hi dear author..
I just wondering if you can take a look on my suggestion...
In your story I'm currently reading right now, I noticed that in every conversation of your cast don't have any sign of them talking... I mean... Why didn't you put some sign like [" "] this.... Because its kinda tricky for me... To take note that they (the cast) are already talking. Except for the lines you put that indicates they are already having conversations..
I hope you don't mind...
I'm just voicing my mind
