KaylaCrawley1
Another in final destination part 2:
Teru couldn’t even finish exhaling before Lucas *was at the bottom of the staircase
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KaylaCrawley1
Near beginning of final destination part 2 there is a sentence that should start with “Kieran rubbed *his back”
I’ll start using asterisks to note missing words.
KaylaCrawley1
Same chapter just an extra word in a sentence “Blaise cradled him at in one of the chairs” don’t need the word at.
KaylaCrawley1
In final destination part one there’s a sentence that is missing the word I. “I guess I have become a fool”
KaylaCrawley1
I’m a librarian so editing stuff must be in my blood lol. Cuz I read frequently or try too anyways. I’ve been crocheting more recently though, but I always keep up with this book.
KaylaCrawley1
I can do that!! I might reread some earlier chapters and see if I can find any errors. Typos are the easiest to spot, unneeded punctuation I am not as good at spotting, but can spot fragmented sentences pretty well too.
GiveMeThatBread
@KaylaCrawley1 you should just be my grammar editor at this point for Book 2 and onward hahaha. since I don't have one for it (past editor for published version book 1 is too busy now!)
Noxcatulus
I could really see this story be a TV show
KaylaCrawley1
In leaving on a jet plane chapter in middle sentence should read: “They have a soft spot for the extinct gender.” Just missing the word spot.
GiveMeThatBread
I suspect there may a glitch connected to my account, some readers have reported 1) chapter won't appear for them and 2) I seemed to have disappeared. But, I have never received a TOS violation email, and I can still see myself on a different account. If this continues to be an issue, please send a help ticket! I sent one earlier to ask what is going on, though.
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@GiveMeThatBread I've contacted help support. To my readers having issues: log out and in, check language settings, and let me know if these are occurring on the desktop version only.
-Tonia74-
Is it me, or did you completely disappear off Wattpad?
GiveMeThatBread
@-Tonia74- I didn't get any notification that something was wrong with my novel, so I wonder if it's a glitch because the other comments below said they're having issues opening the story
The_Shitty_Turk
When ever I am trying to read wattpad somehow failing to load the story EVERY.SINGLE.TIME
Plus its only happening when I am trying to read your story any other book is just fine
I always have to wait couple of hours :'(
GiveMeThatBread
@TypoGodZ I got you! The terms "omega" and "kiss" are unreachable on Tapas, that's why it doesn't appear haha https://tapas.io/series/The-Vampires-Last-Omega
sof1aaaa_a
yk what's strange? these days i can't finish reading stories that i start because wattpad keeps saying that "this page was lost or reserved for a limited group of people" and i can't read anymore. has this happened to anyone else? how can i make it stop?
all advice appreciated!
GiveMeThatBread
@sof1aaaa_a If wattpad continues to have problems, the story is also available on Tapas! And there's no ads there too
sof1aaaa_a
@ GiveMeThatBread i don't know :( i honestly hope i'll fix itself, i can't wait to read more of your amazing stories
GiveMeThatBread
@sof1aaaa_a I've never heard of this!!! Maybe it's a glitch? My entire wattpad became Russian recently even though the settings say English