Gleam-eyes

Hiya Dragons,
          	
          	The new chapter for BtH is out.
          	
          	Dedication this time again to @CoreyDagenais for commenting on the last chapter. 
          	
          	For this one, I have a question again: Do you want to see Jiraiya and Hiruzen's fights?
          	
          	A quick word, as many have probably seen Wattpad will shut down the private messaging. I have made it a habit of messaging people who vote on my stories. That will be coming to an end because of that and I just want you to know that I still see all your votes and appreciate them a lot. They really mean a lot to me and I hope that you will continue to like my work.
          	
          	
          	Anyways that is it for today,
          	
          	Take care and stay safe,
          	
          	Peace,
          	
          	Gleam-eyes

Devillord1211

@Gleam-eyes I see
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Gleam-eyes

@Devillord1211 hi, i call it that as a kind of joke with myself because when i started i always typed haterfall instead of waterfall so it basically came from that ^^'
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Devillord1211

Or even BTWF
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Gleam-eyes

Hiya Dragons,
          
          The new chapter for BtH is out.
          
          Dedication this time again to @CoreyDagenais for commenting on the last chapter. 
          
          For this one, I have a question again: Do you want to see Jiraiya and Hiruzen's fights?
          
          A quick word, as many have probably seen Wattpad will shut down the private messaging. I have made it a habit of messaging people who vote on my stories. That will be coming to an end because of that and I just want you to know that I still see all your votes and appreciate them a lot. They really mean a lot to me and I hope that you will continue to like my work.
          
          
          Anyways that is it for today,
          
          Take care and stay safe,
          
          Peace,
          
          Gleam-eyes

Devillord1211

@Gleam-eyes I see
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Gleam-eyes

@Devillord1211 hi, i call it that as a kind of joke with myself because when i started i always typed haterfall instead of waterfall so it basically came from that ^^'
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Devillord1211

Or even BTWF
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Gleam-eyes

Hiya Dragons, 
          
          The next chapter for BtH is out.
          
          Thank you guys for reading it. 
          
          I don't really have a question for today,  as the next chapter is pretty much set i stone already. So just tell me what your thoughts are and what you think happened.
          
          Dedication today to @CoreyDagenais for commenting on the last chapter.
          
          That is all for today, 
          
          Take care and stay safe.
          
          Peace,
          
          Gleam-eyes

Gleam-eyes

Hiya Dragons,
          
          The next chapter for BtH is out. Hope you like it
          
          No dedication this time around.
          
          This time I have a question for you guys. Do you want to see the general outcome for Konoha from this battle or do you want me to specifically follow Naruto and Fuu on their path and see the consequences of the events through their eyes?
          
          
          Anyways, another short chapter, because I had exams the last two weeks, but now I have a bit more free time to write so I expect that there will be more longer chapters again.
          
          
          That is it for now.
          
          Take care and stay safe,
          
          Peace,
          
          Gleam-eyes

Gleam-eyes

Hiya Dragons,
          
          the next chapter for BtH is out.
          
          I am happy to say that I managed to make a chapter that is around 2k words again. Hopefully I can keep that up.  Anyways, no dedication this time.
          
          As some of you expected already, there will be a few fights in the upcoming chapters and that means of course consequences for our pair of heroes, if you could choose something, what would that be? 
          
          (I will try to incorporate your suggestions but I won't promise anything, it has to fit with the story and the plan I have for it.)
          
          
          That is it for today, thanks for reading
          
          Take care and stay safe,
          
          Peace,
          
          Gleam-eyes

Gleam-eyes

Hiya Dragons, 
          
          The next chapter for BtH is out.  I apologize for it being so short, but university is a bitch at the moment. 
          
          I hope that I can come back to my usual length shortly. 
          
          Anyways, for this time the dedication is again to @erazerxd again for his reply to the question. As to your reply reaper, I didnt mean exactly this chapter, as you have surely seen, but more like the next chapters in general. 
          
          For this chapter, I dont have a question, so just post what you think, if you want.
          
          That's it for today.
          
          Take care and stay safe, 
          
          Gleam-eyes

Gleam-eyes

Hiya Dragons,
          
          The new chapter of BtH is out.
          
          Dedication this time to erazerxd for the big analysis they wrote on my post for last chapter. 
          To you reaper, I would answer to the text, but I fear that i would spoiler the future plot of the book. I hope you understand.
          
          Now, for next chapter I want to know if you guys want to have some emotional moments?
          
          Anyways that is it.
          
          Take care and stay safe.
          Peace,
          
          Gleam-eyes

Gleam-eyes

Hiya Dragons, 
          
          The next chapter for BtH is out. Sorry for the delay. 
          
          Not really much to say for now. Dedication to @erazerxd for his lovely comment on the last chapter. Also thanks to @SolarusPhoenix for commenting on last chapter as well. 
          Today I have a question for you again: 
          
          Do you want the Konoha crush to happen or do you want to have another type of showdown with Pain and the Akatsuki? (Post your answer in the comments as always.
          
          I have a discord channel, where I am online a lot of the time (although I am mostly shown as offline ) If you want, you can talk to me there: https://discord.gg/8FxcsJZfaT
          
          
          
          Anyways, that is it for today. 
          
          Take care and stay safe, 
          
          Peace, 
          
          Gleam-eyes

erazerxd

He wants a clean start*
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erazerxd

@Gleam-eyes it wouldnt really be logical for pain to attack konoha since pain only attacked konoha to draw out naruto, but pain can also precieve naruto not just killing the counsler and the leaf teams sent after him as a lingering connection and still attacks konoha anyways, but in my humble opinion it would be more logical for pain to try to first seperate our pair of lovers then try to tackle each seperatly but he wouldnt really have the need for the 9 tails yet as even if he gets 7 tails out of fuu he would still need the 8 tails
            
            But who knows maybe naruto still holds feelings for konoha and pain attacking konoha might draw those feelings out as a smart person once said
            
            "Growth happens in the most unexpected of places"
            
            And maybe naruto wants to hate the leaf but he still have those who deep in his heart are dear to him it can be said a something like this
            
            "Muj ko shesay may daagh dikha to may shesha saf ker ker thukgia
            
            Bad may maloom hoya daagh to moo per tha (This is in Urdu my mother toung" 
            
            It roughly translates to 
            
            I saw a stain on the mirror and grew tired after cleaning the mirror time and time again
            
            I later realised the stain wasnt on the mirror but on my face
            
            This means to some extent that he wants a keep start he wants to remove the leaf from him but time and again he cant and after taking a look from an other angle he finds he cant leave the leaf for some reason or an other
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