Godpurplesyou

hey everyone! remember the poem Romeo and Juliet ( Romeo POV)? i felt like i'd like to share to you all the first draft of the poem before i edited it ahaha! here you go!  It's the cringe version of it ahahahha 
          	Mercury 
          	
          	When I felt my lover's death,
          	I thought it's time to plan my last breath. 
          	Alas, this was all tragedy, 
          	i refuse to accept this reality... 
          	
          	I want to reunite with my Juliet, 
          	who smiled as bright as the sun. 
          	Got my ticket to join her, 
          	I headed off to where we last were. 
          	
          	On the way to my beloved, 
          	i just had to get detoured! 
          	i couldn’t hold back anymore, 
          	and killed her suitor. 
          	
          	At last my love, 
          	for i shall reunite with you, my dove. 
          	my time has arrived, 
          	as my heart clenched. 
          	
          	one last peck, and farewell

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dallas1213

@Godpurplesyou You're very welcome:)
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Godpurplesyou

@dallas1213 ooo I'll check it out when I can, thank you for this wonderful recommendation!!
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Godpurplesyou

hey everyone! remember the poem Romeo and Juliet ( Romeo POV)? i felt like i'd like to share to you all the first draft of the poem before i edited it ahaha! here you go!  It's the cringe version of it ahahahha 
          Mercury 
          
          When I felt my lover's death,
          I thought it's time to plan my last breath. 
          Alas, this was all tragedy, 
          i refuse to accept this reality... 
          
          I want to reunite with my Juliet, 
          who smiled as bright as the sun. 
          Got my ticket to join her, 
          I headed off to where we last were. 
          
          On the way to my beloved, 
          i just had to get detoured! 
          i couldn’t hold back anymore, 
          and killed her suitor. 
          
          At last my love, 
          for i shall reunite with you, my dove. 
          my time has arrived, 
          as my heart clenched. 
          
          one last peck, and farewell

Godpurplesyou

It's been a year since starting my first ever poem book: Driftwood. Here I'd like to thank all of my readers for being with me, commenting on my book. 
          
          I use poems to express my feelings when I'm down, and sad. It helps, I'm saying this from my personal experience. Writing to express feelings may or may not help you, but it did help me. 
          
          I'd also like to thank my best friend, BC. She was the one who helped me through my darkest time, she was also the one who made me start writing poems. Thank you so much, BC. I'd also like to thank my good friends, Ren, Liv, Sky, JC, and JW, thank you for being with me, along with in my journey. 
          
          Love you all! 
          God bless ya'll! 
          
          Mercury out <3

Godpurplesyou

Godpurplesyou

yes i truly agree
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_poets_

@Godpurplesyou ahh it's sad how the world has forgotten spirituality, love, unity and rather into materialism of power and wars like this oof :')
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