HBFhelly

Sorry for the continued delay… sorting through some life drama right now. 

HBFhelly

Winter wolf has about three chapters left, it will have a sequel. I’m writing as fast as I can but I’ve had a lot of life stuff going on that’s interfering.
          
          I have also been working on a companion book… Desert Wolf (I think you can guess who it is )
          
          Once I complete this book I will take a short break from it to focus on getting the companion books on blood moon done. Also I’m doing a re write/major edit of Blood Moon and it will be available for a paid tier on my Inkitt profile for those that dislike Galatea. The rest will be there as well, per my contract with Galatea, I won’t be able to offer it for free, but previews will remain here. 

MinHolifirstlove

@HBFhelly life comes first. Your work is always, detailed, innovative and refreshing, anytime it will be welcome. Thanks for the update, you are very nice to your readers.
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CatWhip

@HBFhelly thanks for the update ☺️ personal life definitely comes first, no need to ever apolose for that. I will wait and support you in any way I can and be just as excited when you update when you can.
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lucydo1

Hi, i just wanted to express my deepest gratitude to you and thank you for all the work on your stories! I have found your story Winter wolf this weekend after being totally dissapointed by other poorly wtitten stories on this app and totally fell in love with your style of writing and characters. I feel really lucky that i found your profile and I am excited to keep up with what is to come. Thank you so much, you are an amazing author! 

HBFhelly

Aww…  Thank you so much ❤️ it really does mean a lot! You made my day 
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HBFhelly

Sorry guys… I’m doing a brief pause on Winter wolf, namely because I changed it from the original version so much the ending doesn’t make a ton of sense. So now I’m trying to either find someway to connect it to the original ending or come up with a new one… feeling slightly aimless right now and this next chapter is a pivotal point so I’m a bit at a loss, been staring at it for hours and I can’t figure it out. 

lemonstre10

The thing I love about your books and your writing style is that when you need to take the time to work through the plot, the result is something absolutely incredible that will have me at the edge of my seat! Sometimes you need a second to clear your head of a project in order to finish it. Your books are incredible and always worth the wait! 
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CatWhip

@HBFhelly thanks for keeping us in the loop. We love you and your writing in every way so are happy to wait and support you 
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HBFhelly

I'm going to finish the pending updates first... but as I start my edit/re-write on Blood Moon... I have some questions.
          
          1) Should I drop the phonetics? People seemed to find them annoying. (The accents).
          
          2) Cut down the scenes ️ and try to ️️️ up the ones I do leave? Saw a lot of comments they were boring/ excessive When I did the re-write prior to signing Galatea I was trying to make them a little more... I dunno, tame? 
          
          3) Any scenes that anyone strongly felt should have been shown that weren't? Mentioned things.. etc.
          
          4) Make the Blood Moon chapter a mixed POV. Still not sure how I'll make it work since it's hard not to repeat.
          
          5) Separate the male's bonus chapters, expand them and make them into short companion books kind of like the others. Definitely NOT long ones & | honestly did not mean to create spoilers for the rest of the books, it was just hard to leave those out once I finished the main story because I hated when books end abruptly and left me feeling unsatistied. So when I started writing, I had to give every character a firm ending.
          
          6) Anything that really annoyed the fout of you that you'd like seen gone?
          
          7) Plot holes you didn't feel were answered? (That aren't to be answered in companion books)
          
          8) Any other suggestions that would make it better?

ChocolateFrosting6

It's been ages since I read the first BM book.  I remember the basic story line and the ending.  I'm not opposed to reading other POV.  I just like it to be equally shared. Main characters can't always describe everything as it's happening all the time.  So multiple POV, great.  Accents are awesome, better than that are the foreign words.  Love learning a new word, especially if I have to go look it up.  I didn't like how many spoilers gave away Joanna.  I was cringing when I started it because I knew she was going to suffer horribly.   Also how she eventually ends up.  The reverse harem is fun, but I wasn't a fan of most of her mates not submitting to her.  Aaron really pissed me off the most.  
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CatWhip

I agree with @minholifirstlove about the POV's as it adds a repetitive feel that can be redundant.
            
            I personally didn't mind the accents either...but it has been a minute since I've read BM and may need to do so again to provide better feedback 
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summer_nyth

@HBFhelly Hello. I enjoy and respect each and every author's unique style in writing. Yours is definitely a good one. Most times I learned from each author the variation of styles and I think those things makes one different from the others. English is not my mother language so am still learning, and well writing is an art, there's beauty in every word. So as a reader I appreciate all styles. 
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HBFhelly

I have to choose sleep, I’m sorry. Unexpected bills hit, extra shifts had to be worked, and haven’t had writing time. I don’t have much more to do on it, so a few days is probably all I need. Hate to do this, I know you’ve been patient. 

CatWhip

@HBFhelly sleep and family take priority over everything else. Take however long you need 
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MinHolifirstlove

@HBFhelly you do an amazing job. You deserve that resting time and more. Thanks for all your amazing books.
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Misslittlekat

@HBFhelly don't worry we will always be waiting for your update! Even if it take days or weeks. Your writing is a master piece of art in a form of words that give us a story that will never leave our minds or heart! Hope you have a better day. 
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HBFhelly

I’m going to have to pause on the update this week. For some reason everything I write it just terrible right now (blaming stress for stupid life stuff) and I can’t put up this lackluster terrible chapter thats nothing like I want it. Gimme a bit to get the writing spark back so I can fix it. Maybe next week. 

HBFhelly

Decided to do another little poll... since I'm kind of curious and you'll find out soon enough, especially some of the comments I got;
          Gray's personality... whatcha think it'll be?

MinHolifirstlove

@HBFhelly well he already proofed to be a warm heart, he helped his mum to safe Raissa and her mum and now he is going against his own blood to protect Raissa, I agree he definitely has more the heart of a good wolf as his mum than a demon. I just wish our clever author can find the way for them love. It must exist a solution to get ride of his demon side, they just need to find the right witch. Please let Raissa free his soul and save him of his demon side. 
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Jinxie5785

I agree! Even at such a young age, Gray proved to be smart beyond his years, a survivor, a protector. I also think this may cause a war over the heart and mind. He seems to have inherited more of the wolf side of his parentage. 
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