HammerHandedHeart

Sex scenes are honestly so hard for me to write. There are so many elements you have to remember to make it believable. I don’t know why I do it to myself, but I keep coming up with these horny characters despite sucking at writing sex scenes lol I'm assuming the more I do it the better I'll get, ironically the same thing can’t be said about actual sex. 
          	
          	Excerpt_Chapter 28_Objects Of Desire.
          	
          	Instinct took over as my hips pumped, creating a delicious friction between us that coiled tension in my balls and drew a sharp hiss from my lips. Isla's moans filled the room, and she parted her legs more, inviting me closer. 
          	
          	She was so soft, and her arousal eased the friction, allowing my cock to glide smoothly between us. I reached down until my thumb circled her clit. Isla gasped, her entire body convulsing as she arched her back in ecstasy, throwing her head back in pleasure. Her scent is so potent it drives me insane. I have to grind my teeth against the urge to bite her.  
          	
          	"Mmm, Kyro!"
          	
          	Her moans were so innocent, it was almost bewildering. Despite her lack of experience, the way she vocalized her pleasure seemed to catch even her by surprise, as if she couldn't help but let them escape. It was a struggle to maintain control when she moaned like that. I had never heard the women I had been trained to please make such raw, unfiltered sounds.
          	
          	I deepened our kiss, then withdrew to lavish attention on that spot on her neck that never failed to elicit those sweet, melodic moans from her lips. I trade between biting and licking her neck, praising her for giving me this gift, and telling her how good she tasted.  
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HammerHandedHeart

Sex scenes are honestly so hard for me to write. There are so many elements you have to remember to make it believable. I don’t know why I do it to myself, but I keep coming up with these horny characters despite sucking at writing sex scenes lol I'm assuming the more I do it the better I'll get, ironically the same thing can’t be said about actual sex. 
          
          Excerpt_Chapter 28_Objects Of Desire.
          
          Instinct took over as my hips pumped, creating a delicious friction between us that coiled tension in my balls and drew a sharp hiss from my lips. Isla's moans filled the room, and she parted her legs more, inviting me closer. 
          
          She was so soft, and her arousal eased the friction, allowing my cock to glide smoothly between us. I reached down until my thumb circled her clit. Isla gasped, her entire body convulsing as she arched her back in ecstasy, throwing her head back in pleasure. Her scent is so potent it drives me insane. I have to grind my teeth against the urge to bite her.  
          
          "Mmm, Kyro!"
          
          Her moans were so innocent, it was almost bewildering. Despite her lack of experience, the way she vocalized her pleasure seemed to catch even her by surprise, as if she couldn't help but let them escape. It was a struggle to maintain control when she moaned like that. I had never heard the women I had been trained to please make such raw, unfiltered sounds.
          
          I deepened our kiss, then withdrew to lavish attention on that spot on her neck that never failed to elicit those sweet, melodic moans from her lips. I trade between biting and licking her neck, praising her for giving me this gift, and telling her how good she tasted.  
          https://www.wattpad.com/1430649842-

HammerHandedHeart

Introducing King Kyro : 
          
          She was clueless about my sleep patterns, yet another quirk that set me apart from the men of her world. While they needed their solid hours, I managed with just a quick recharge, twice a fortnight. I tried not to disturb Isla when she slept; her need for rest reminded me of our differences. So, I watched, though I couldn't shake the sense that my behavior verged on creepy. At the palace, I'd slip away before she woke.
          
          Not today.
          
          The human suns were too bright.
          
          The humans sang too much.
          
          Already singing, and the burning suns had only pondered their rise. Cooked fish, the blood of perfect, fresh meats sizzled, charred to ruin on the fire, were vomit-inducing.
          
          It was love that compelled me to sniff the air with my full chest.
          
          Love compelled me to take it all in.
          
          That morning, love was all I could think about.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1429968770-blood-lust

HammerHandedHeart

This is the romance trope I plan on breaking today. 
          
          "Her exotic scent—a bewitching blend of vanilla, caramel, toasted marshmallows, and heliotrope" 
          
          The Revolution begins now. 
          
          I'm putting an end to this. Please stop me if you believe this is the peak of romance. We're writing alpha males who growl and grunt but none of them appreciate a woman’s musky armpits in the morning ?! lol Tell me if I'm crazy. I'm not saying the MC needs to stink, not at all, but smelling like a candy factory mixed with wildflowers is wild to me. 
          
          The guy who sniffs your armpit when it stinks would literally die for you.

HammerHandedHeart

@Hxrned_angel I think I achieved it with this new character. I don’t know, time will tell muhahaha!
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Hxrned_angel

@HammerHandedHeart I fully agree, why do they always smell so good in the books! Real people don't smell that good unless the are covered in perfume/Cologne
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