Young writers of the Horror Hill book. In total there are 6 thrilling parts!

Horror Hill was an idea from a very young age for both of us, and to publish it and hopefully get good reviews for this series would be incredible. 
Please feel free to be critical (both positively and negatively) so we can further improve Horror Hill, hopefully moving it on to its next stage of development: a physical book. Also, we have a YouTube channel dedicated to Horror Hill that is linked via the Horror Hill Audio Accompaniment and a merchandise shop on the app Redbubble (HHillMerch). https://www.redbubble.com/people/HHillMerch/shop?utm_source=rb-native-app&utm_campaign=share-artist&utm_medium=android
P.s. If you have unanswered questions about what goes on in the first parts parts, there are 6 parts in total where all questions will be answered, so make sure to read them all!