hopelovesraura

Hi love your story's! I just made my own. Can you please help me out and give me some tips?

IceCreamCakelin

Thank you! I read what you've done so far and I'm excited to read more :) 
            as far as tips go, I think you'really pretty much right on track. The only tips I'll give you are maaaybe try to keep it on one of the persons P.O.V for longer? Also keep suspense levels up? I don't know but I think your story is going very well so far! Keep it up friend! :)
Balas