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I'm glad I notice a lot of Tensura stories usually get complicated when they mention every skill and detail of the verse including characters no one remembers so I tried to make it simpler for fans that have watched the anime to at least understand though that does just sprain from my own ignorance of the LN and just the important sum ups I look into and I'm glad you appreciate the comedic touch I put on this most recent restart story and that you like the way I do things look forward to the next chapter it should release soon

@WGS564 It's simple, I really like your story. from the storyline, characters, way of writing that is easy to understand, and no less important the comedy always entertains me, especially Rimuru's interactions with girls like Ciel, or Ciel and Azrael in your new story.

@Voidrimuru thanks for your opinion, I do appreciate it since I'm trying to get people thoughts on them so I can make my stories better. So thanks much appreciated 

@Voidrimuru some of my honest opinions on your stories, especially the ones I read, namely Tensura Multiverse: React and Tensura: God in the Unknown Future.
            
            I like both, that's because I like short story series, one shots, and reactions.
            
            reading tensura stories like "back to the past" and the like has made me bored because the plot is more or less the same.
            
            in the book, Tensura: God in the Unknown Future there is an original story made by yourself that is good.
            
            However, there are also drawbacks for me.
            
            That's the part of the writing that is not neat in my opinion So I suggest writing the story casually and no need to rush. Make sure first whether there are any errors or missing things in your story before you upload it, so that it will reduce errors/shortcomings in your story.
            
            and, in the book Tensura Multiverse: React. It would be better if you read the source first, then write what you want to write yourself, and of course with your own language and writing style. because what I saw was copy paste, and it was also not neat and reduced the excitement of reading the reactions.
            
            that is my honest opinion about your story. and sorry if my words are difficult to understand, because English is not my language, so I can only rely on a translator, which might make you misunderstand.

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Thats who i call "my favorite Vietnamese author"

Happy that you likee them

@cokhgtien 
            3. and lastly is the story entitled "Iruma! Rimuru-sensei gọi cậu kìa!!," this is a really great story.
            - Reading Rimuru's daily activities with his students was really fun, going through the hellish training that Rimuru gave his students, but at the same time seeing them complaining or maybe some other funny scene, it really made me laugh.
            - there are also feelings of sadness, emotion, and the like.
            when Rimuru turned himself in when he was suspected of being a criminal (spy? I forgot why Rimuru was suspected) and was about to be executed and the sorrow of Rimuru's students"
            - or when "Iruma who already has a great love for Rimuru, whom he considers as family/important person to iruma"
            - Iruma's struggle against the monster Zoh (I kinda forgot the name) to save Sullivan and wake up Rimuru who was kidnapped by his enemies, until Iruma has all the mortal wounds"
            - and one of the scenes that made me feel emotional is when "alice asmodeus who picks up/collects iruma's soul by entering his memory (?), alice sees iruma's struggle since childhood, falls and cries alone without anyone trying to help him/calm him, standing on his feet alone, holding back tears alone, left alone to the cold, with alice who saw how bad little iruma's life was, even making him cry and wishing iruma to also cry aloud so that iruma's evil parents would hear. saying "happy birthday iruma" and such, always forcing himself not to cry and all." all of that really got me… ah how should I put it, the point is like that.
            
            sometimes I find it very difficult to understand stories that are not in my language, even though I rely on translators, but "Nguynjolly2" no, he writes very neatly, punctuation and such, really good at writing.
            and every story he writes really makes me join to feel what the characters in the story feel, as a result everything is great, I still want to finish ""Iruma! Rimuru-sensei gọi cậu kìa!!," before the others.

You're welcome 

@cokhgtien no problem, and thanks for the advice you gave. I like the tensura verse, but to be honest, lately I've read a lot of fanfiction about tensura/rimuru, so finding new stories that are fun is quite difficult. 
            So, thanks again guys