Irene/Eirene

Hello! I'm a teen author, and I've been writing stories since 5th grade. I'm also interested in drawing, as well as writing! I've been developing this one story called "Enchanted Heart Necklaces." A brief description, it's about two boys and their friendship, and how their bond could cause conflict with each other. No, this is not one of those cheesy 'the power of friendship' novels. It shows compassion, and a strong connection with the two, making mistakes and fixing it together along the way.

I would love ANY kind of feedback from ANYONE! From the storytelling, to the words, to literally anything, just a little help would be greatly appreciated. I'm hoping this story would spread far and wide to show that there is true bonding and friendship still lingering in this world, and the problems you would face to maintain it! Thank you.

(PS: The time on how much I spent on these parts are really short because I pasted them from my original papers, Google Docs)