Error_In_My_Mind

Thank you for following me. :)
          I'm glad you seem to be enjoying my stories. I haven't been having the motivation to continue them, cause of personal reasons but hopefully, sometime in January they will be starting again. So you can watch out then.
          
          Btw, I love you stories as well.❤

TylerBaker623

Okay I'm going to say how I feel your book kind of confuses me right up when he goes to the Potter's home I think that have brother the way he was looking at him is just completely disgusting and I love that because it shows that the Potter's are not good people but what kind of seeds me is is the tomato them you know going back to Hogwarts it doesn't show where they leave the house and they go to the Normans property that confused me because they're just back at Hogwarts when they are supposed to leave Lily and James is house I also think you should add a restraining order I think you should rewrite this chapter I mean I love the book but it just really confuses me

ItIsMee1412

@ TylerBaker623  thank you for the tipp, i was thinking about rewriting the whole story, since i red it and found some things that dont make sense. Thanks for telling me!
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