James Locke

@DrHyde8MrJ3kyll thank you and I hope you will enjoy the next chapter when it comes out.

@DrHyde8MrJ3kyll in my opinion I would have Roco explain to the family the situation given the fact that that to me from my perspective is what a responsible father would do. But I would also have it to where he explains to them that there are aspects to Ryan's past that he may want to share himself at the right time and that they should be open to it. I would also have Roco let Ryan know that he has explained the situation to the family and that they're willing to hear him out and not pass judgment preemptively and they want to help him heal. Now considering that there was that situation where he was about to attack the nurse you could potentially have it to where Ryan is worried that he's going to get rejected, you could potentially have it to where the family is a little bit nervous but they genuinely want to help him. There's also the possibility that you could have it where either government officials or other third party individuals see Ryan more as either a potential threat or specimen given the fact that he demonstrated some forms of enhanced abilities. Those are just some thoughts I have on the situation. Hope it helps.

@DrHyde8MrJ3kyll I have a problem with a choice where Roco should tell his family about Ryan and his acts of self defense or should Ryan tell them himself to help him move on that trauma and use it to help him later on. What do you believe is best?

@litter21 it would be one less distraction for the author. I am curious as to what changes he'll make in this rewrite.

Well that explains it. He made the right decision. However, I strongly believe that the author should get over with his finals and then start doing writer stuff

@litter21 the author pulled it and is going to rewrite it due to the fact a good chunk of the feedback was negative.