Y'all going back and revising TBWATOC is such a wild ride! Not only did I write that book when I was 15, but my writing style has changed soooo much. Like, the way I introduced dialogue is technically grammatically correct in most cases, but it's just such a different style from what I do now. The original TBWATOC has much more of a long-winded feel to the dialogue; whereas, now, I prefer more short/snappy dialogue. So it's just interesting, lol.
I'm going to make another announcement later on discussing some of the changes I've made to the Revised version of the book, so stay tuned for that!
-love,
Jeanne