Shelley2594

hey you.......yes you looking at screen 
          
          im kinda a newbe it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          because all the people that have read it say like 'good work' or 'keep going' but that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle

Freakx3

When you get assigned to be the bodyguard of one of the hottest, new moviestars in Hollywood, you would think any girl would scream in excitement, but not Cera Joyce. She sees right through his glamorous facade to the gets-all-he-wants whiny brat he really is. The journey Cera Joyce is about to embark on won't be easy, especially with Richard's spoiled demands, obnoxious attitude, and cocky demeanor hindering her ability to perform her job, but she faces every obstacle head on, regardless of the hoops she must jump through. Somewhere along the way though, Cera Joyce will realize things are not always what they appear to be and will have to face her biggest challenge yet! Read about it from Purplemiley0! :D 
          
          I'll apriciate all feedback and comments :] 
          
          ~Purplemiley0