@writerprisha That's so sweet of you sorry that I can't read it all at once as my exams are on way but I'll try. Actually, I just wanna tell you that when you publish the chapter before that try to make your paragraphs really small as readers could comment on that and if the paragraphs are large we tend to forget the lines which we loved by the end of para and I am saying this because I feel ki agar zada interaction ho payega readers aur writer ka to it motivates and encourages the writer to make it better and thoda apni audience ( readers ) ko bhi samajh e ka mauka milta hai ki what sort of delulu they like.
And honestly I am telling you this for your betterment as a friend if you could consider not just a writer so don't be discouraged by that and your writings are Lovely i really appreciate that✨
