KazutoraHannemiya

36k reads on something I made as a 12 year old is batshit

KazutoraHannemiya

Working on two stories right now. They are practically the sane story except the Mc has a different personality and reaction to things, changes some events of the story. 
          
          Events that happen in both stories are events that I will call "Parallels" and eventually I will mix the two books into a final third one. 
          
          The first book I'm working on is 
          
          "Preach To The Choir"
          
          The second is called
          
          "I Know" 
          
          Both stories will follow the story of Jay Kirshtein, a boy with a white parent and a spanish parent. The origins will be immensely different, but certain "Parallels" will be exactly the same. The only difference will be the mcs reactions and takeaways from these events.

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"Preach To The Choir" follows a confident and angry Jay Kirshtein falling into villainy after his Uncle Fernando passes away. He believes that the government and anyone who sudes with them are the true villains so he goes out of his way to ruin everyone's lives. Especially those who live with privilege. He lives knowing that the lives he has taken were unnecessary. He abuses everyone he knows mentally, gaslighting, manipulating, and guilt tripping all of them. This Jay has a White father and Spanish mother. This Jay is from Earth-8787
            
            "I Know" follows a timid and scared Jay Kirshtein who vows to end all villainy through any means necessary after his Uncle Fernando is killed. He believes that the world has given everyone a chance, and that those who fall into villainy are undeserving scum. He takes the lives of every villain, knowing it will help the lives of the innocents. He knows what he does is wrong, but he lives by the saying "Sometimes to do some good, you have to be the bad guy." He is kind and caring to everyone he knows. Due to this overhwlming kindness, he is often used and treated terribly. He is at first in an abusive relationship with the gwen stacy of his universe. This Jay has a Spanish father and a White mother. This Jay is from Earth-7878
            
            I want yall to give some opinions on this, I'm doing it anyway but I'd like to hear some thoughts.
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KazutoraHannemiya

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if anyone does book commisions, id like a book where a guy lives in 2022, hes 14-15 and goes thru shit. ex throws false rape accusations n the such. he becomes mentally fucked. he hates her but cant stop loving her. the more he hates the harder it is to get over her. suddenly he's isekaid into a world in which he becomes a princes escort/bodyguard. he finds that that the ex who ruined him has become the princes bride. he goes insane thinking of how she ruined him and is living lavish. only happy ending id accept is where he gets over her. id like alternate endings too. like a bad one where he takes his life or sum. would love an insanity ending.

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You know, now that I heard this idea I can’t stop thinking about it _:(´ཀ`」∠):_
            
            If I really do decide to write this I’ll make sure to let you know, might not be able to do it justice, but I’ll do it anyways
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TheBatWithTheGat

@KazutoraHannemiya this got to be the best story idea I've ever hear and now I want to see it
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KazutoraHannemiya

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viva la vida is my favorite song and this books inspiration. stems from my life. went thru shit, cant move on, and im trying to stay strong. was played off and thrown away like a pawn just so the queen couldnt be taken. yk?
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KazutoraHannemiya

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Guys, to those who need to hear it, everything will be okay. no matter how shit things get or how depressed you may become, always have hope. without hope there isnt a chance. without hope you forfeit. most of us are too young to quit. most of us grew up without shit and cant handle the change. never give up, there is still shit to do. ever felt the wind pushing against you on a motorcucle that you are driving? ill tell you, amazing feeling. something that you'd miss if you gave up. ever come home to a lover who missed you all day? some dont, some dont. but we are young, our generation can find the one. I am 15 years old. i am a white male. ive contemplated suicide too many times to count. earlier this year, my ex, who i thought was the one, accused me of rape. but despite the extreme discrimination that i suffer, and the harsh reality i live in, im still here. being me. doing what i love. because no matter what hurt me, i got up. i dont have time to be hurt. i have shit i wanna do and accomplish. shit i cant do if i lay here and let things get to me. people, we have one chance ag this. and what we do with that chance is on us. what we decide to follow, and do is on us. big or small, we impact things. basically, summed up, life is too short not to live it.