Keikofeliciano22

Hey guys,
          	My first story is completed. It is not that long but I think it is pretty much fine for my first one. I am currently working on the other one. I will start posting it once I am done with it.
          	Until then, please point my mistakes so that I can improve from them.
          	It was my first time when someone viewed my story and it truly felt great.
          	Thanks to you 
          	Love you

Keikofeliciano22

Hey guys,
          My first story is completed. It is not that long but I think it is pretty much fine for my first one. I am currently working on the other one. I will start posting it once I am done with it.
          Until then, please point my mistakes so that I can improve from them.
          It was my first time when someone viewed my story and it truly felt great.
          Thanks to you 
          Love you