Arien

@JeremyLindsay 
            
            I agree that you should leave the prologue. As for the first chapter, just take up where you left off. Just maybe make Elrond seem a bit more welcoming? 
            And then maybe talk about her live in Rivendell and how it goes all lovely, but one day something happens, and she goes out on an adventure, and finds out more about her past.

@Ladyofleves Fair point. I’ve struggled with length because original content is HARD, even based off of someone else’s work, haha.
            
            I think I want to leave the Prologue as it is because I don’t want to extend the drowning scene. I agree though that the first chapter is too short. I’m just not sure how to extend it, so some DM’s about how to extend it would be helpful because I’m out of ideas  ‍♂️

@JeremyLindsay 
            
            Both. And I would love to read the story you planned!!!