LaurenGarbutt

@chooky2412 I luv it too In the third book mass effect and dragon age are linked together :3 I HAD TO!!

LavenderShae

I just finished "Break the Chains or Heart" and it was good! But try to make paragraphs and split up the chapters, it's easier to read that way! It's great for your first book, just remember to spell check and try to skim through each chapter to make sure what you've typed makes sense, sometimes I mix up my thoughts when I'm writing! Good luck with your other books(: I'm going to read "Where is the heart to break." (: