Leonie0055
So I just re-read "Our blood" and I think I should have waited with publishing it and edited it one more time. Cause some parts of it are really not that good. I guess gore just isn't really my thing? Maybe I should practice it more before actually publishing any of it, but then again, the book is not meant to be perfect and just for fun. And also can someone explain to me why that out of all the chapters in my book has the most votes right now, in such a short time? Do you strangers on the Internet really like violence and dark stuff that much? Or do you like shorter stories better than the long ones? You honestly confuse me... But please tell me what you like and dislike, that way I can improve. Or maybe request something? Still, have a nice day/night!
Leonie0055
@ FakeCzech oh boy... my friend does too, she already loved the first draft. Can I ask tho, do you prefer smooth transitions and a lot of narrating, like my other stories mostly have, or to have it kinda like chopped? I don't know how to explain this, but like sudden changes and actions that aren't explained but just carried out...? It's hard to describe...
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@Leonie0055 Dude i fucking love violence. I live and die for violence. Its so good.
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