LeveledUpLove

Rewriting chapter 5 of Under a Cherry Tree is about to be a real pain WHAT WAS 12/13-YEAR-OLD ME ON FOR REAL! It doesn't even make sense?? Like how Tohru gonna be air hugging one second and then leaning against Kyo as if he wouldn't transform from that?? If not from touch but from the pure kitty bliss, but that's probably the least of my problems with this chapter >:|)) I am seriously questioning the sanity of the readers who stuck through the whole book like--
          	"I went to my room. I put on my pajamas. I hopped into bed. I fell asleep." THAT AIN'T BORING???? I'm grateful but please let me cleanse my sins and I am so sorry.
          	
          	Also sorry for this announcement but I just had to rant, yk? But just like with everything else, everyone is more critical of themselves than people are critical of them. 
          	
          	I will say, my humor was top tier (sometimes).

sire-trashelot

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FUCKING FELT
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LeveledUpLove

Aww I hope you like it 
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wtfishappening23

@LeveledUpLove hahaha, i feel the same when reviewing my own stuff, it SO cringe to see what little me wrote. Cant wait to reread the book!
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LeveledUpLove

Rewriting chapter 5 of Under a Cherry Tree is about to be a real pain WHAT WAS 12/13-YEAR-OLD ME ON FOR REAL! It doesn't even make sense?? Like how Tohru gonna be air hugging one second and then leaning against Kyo as if he wouldn't transform from that?? If not from touch but from the pure kitty bliss, but that's probably the least of my problems with this chapter >:|)) I am seriously questioning the sanity of the readers who stuck through the whole book like--
          "I went to my room. I put on my pajamas. I hopped into bed. I fell asleep." THAT AIN'T BORING???? I'm grateful but please let me cleanse my sins and I am so sorry.
          
          Also sorry for this announcement but I just had to rant, yk? But just like with everything else, everyone is more critical of themselves than people are critical of them. 
          
          I will say, my humor was top tier (sometimes).

sire-trashelot

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LeveledUpLove

Aww I hope you like it 
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wtfishappening23

@LeveledUpLove hahaha, i feel the same when reviewing my own stuff, it SO cringe to see what little me wrote. Cant wait to reread the book!
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LeveledUpLove

I'm going to start rewriting my first Under a Cherry Tree book before continuing the 2nd. I reread it and I cringed by how robotic and fast-paced it was for no reason.  I'm not going to add major story points so if you have read it there's no reason to reread it.

LeveledUpLove

@Kyo_Simper Yay indeed now I don't want to die when reading the first two chapters hahaha
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LeveledUpLove

I’m sorry for my over a year inactivity, although I would love to continue writing- I’m afraid I have limited time, keeping up with my relationships with friends, and my family (including my boyfriend) and school. My future in the medical career (hopefully) needs a little more attention then a couple of stories a started in 6th and 7th grade. However; I have thought about posting school writing.

unicornsister123

Can YOU read my book to?

LeveledUpLove

Yes, it was good! Maybe just a spelling and/or grammar check?
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unicornsister123

Im mot sure if its good i would love some feedback
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unicornsister123

Did you like it
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