Lovell2004

Random Concept Idea:
          	
          	So, I've been reading up on the different Lantern Corps from the DC comics lately and an interesting thought about them occurred to me. All the Lantern Corps are made up of countless different species from thousands of worlds, if not millions. Some of which are already naturally powerful without the rings. And WITH the rings? Some are basically godlike. With that in mind...If the right writer got ahold of the various Lanterns, they could make for an excellent cosmic horror series. Imagine H.P. Lovecraft's universe with power rings that weapons emotions like Willpower, Rage, Avarice, Fear, ect. That could actually be pretty great.

Lovell2004

@Doros70
          	  Oh, that would be badass.
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Doros70

@Lovell2004 
          	  OH! Or maybe! What if wearing a ring turns you into some kind of eldritch creature that represents the attributes of the Corps?
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Lovell2004

@Doros70
          	  That'd probably work. I myself would give most of the Lantern uniforms(Specifically those worn by humanoid aliens) a similar style to Hal Jordan's when he joined the Fear Corp during Injustice. It was a lot easier to take him seriously in that outfit than his green one, not gonna lie.
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Lovell2004

Random Concept Idea:
          
          So, I've been reading up on the different Lantern Corps from the DC comics lately and an interesting thought about them occurred to me. All the Lantern Corps are made up of countless different species from thousands of worlds, if not millions. Some of which are already naturally powerful without the rings. And WITH the rings? Some are basically godlike. With that in mind...If the right writer got ahold of the various Lanterns, they could make for an excellent cosmic horror series. Imagine H.P. Lovecraft's universe with power rings that weapons emotions like Willpower, Rage, Avarice, Fear, ect. That could actually be pretty great.

Lovell2004

@Doros70
            Oh, that would be badass.
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Doros70

@Lovell2004 
            OH! Or maybe! What if wearing a ring turns you into some kind of eldritch creature that represents the attributes of the Corps?
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Lovell2004

@Doros70
            That'd probably work. I myself would give most of the Lantern uniforms(Specifically those worn by humanoid aliens) a similar style to Hal Jordan's when he joined the Fear Corp during Injustice. It was a lot easier to take him seriously in that outfit than his green one, not gonna lie.
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Lovell2004

Random Rant Post:
          
          Okay, so...I'm pretty late to the party regarding this post's subject, but I just recently started digging into that new Suicide Squad game and...Jesus Christ. I'm not exaggerating when I say it has to be the worst written DC video game I've ever seen in my life. Damn near everything about the storyline was completely illogical, even by comic book standards, it's depiction of the Justice League basically takes a piss on each relevant hero present, it brutally degrades the Arkham universe's Batman(Since it's set in the same universe as the Arkham series)and there's literally zero character development from the squad members aside from them being more confident by the end of the game. I haven't played this thing myself(And I'm not going to, I refuse to spend money on anything this awful), but I have seen others play and review it. It's not often that I find any video game objectively terrible regarding it's plotline, but this was definitely an exception. And it's made so much worse by the fact that, if I'm not mistaken, it's Kevin Conroy's last time voicing Batman before he died. That sincerely pisses me off on a personal level here.

Lovell2004

@Doros70
            Can only pray someone does. But if not...well, at least we'll still have the Injustice games to scratch the whole "evil Justice League" itch, lol. Those games are still fine. Just not the movie.
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Doros70

@Lovell2004 
            And that's why I consider Arkham Knight the true ending of the Arkham franchise, not... whatever the hell this abomination is. Wish I could watch a video of someone rewriting it.
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Lovell2004

@Doros70
            Yeah! Or they could've just stuck with the same Desdshot the series was already using. On another note, why would they use a version of the Squad that's mostly made up of regular humans to take on the League? The only member they had with superhuman abilities was King Shark, and even he shouldn't have been strong enough to last much longer than anyone else the League had killed before their arrival. Why not include Deathstroke? Or Bane? Or Killer Crock, Clay Face, Firefly, or anyone else known for having superpowers or access to outlandish weapons that would've helped fight the invasion? Why not force Scarecrow to recreate his toxin and use it against the League? Why are you sending four IDIOTS to challenge evil versions of heroes that have not only beaten them before, but are now more than happy to use lethal force and are backed by an alien army?!
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Lovell2004

William Afton Poem:
          FNAF: Remedy Trials.
          
          "This is the end of the town you know. Thought you could save them, Thought you could be their hero. Let's put on one final show. It's over now, we both know. Your little friends can't help you no more, they're torn apart just like that family of yours. So here we go, try to take on their army. Let's end this fight, Charlie. Go ahead and try to kill me if you're able, you're still weak and it makes you feel unstable. You dare defy the brutal power you've seen, when we've brought Remedy down to It's knees. Everything you love will turn to ashes. I've taken control and I'll strike the matches. Your former home is crumbling, won't you miss it? Soon enough, you'll go down with it. You think you're driven by love? You'll never know love. I know what you are, I'll put you in your place. When you next meet Lizzy, she'll have a lovely game to play. Where'd your little gang go? I killed them yesterday. Even you can't bring them back and your mother can't save the day. Are you feeling shy? You should have just died. You're father is gone and auntie has lied. Remedy will burn and there's no place to hide. I'll stuff you in a suit, trapped forever inside."

Lovell2004

@Doros70
            I'm glad to hear that.
            Well, glad to read that.
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Doros70

@Lovell2004 
            It is good from a nostalgic point of view, and the twist you gave the lyrics for William made them pretty fun to read.
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Lovell2004

@Doros70
            Is that review good or bad?
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Lovell2004

Homicidal Liu Poem:
          FNAF: Remedy Trials.
          
          "You know me better than anyone. You know my thoughts before they've begun. You know my darkest desires. What breaks me down, what inspires. And you hold it over me. We've spent most of our lifetimes together. More family drama than I can remember. But when we're under attack? You stick your knife in my back. Hello brother, there are things in my heart even you can't see. There's no other freak from this town who knows you like me. I wanna be free from you, but I need you. A fate I most hate, but I'm forced to accept. And so, brother, what shall we do next? You see I've made a "new" lady friend? A face we thought we'd never see again. There's a calmness when she's hear. I could've lived the rest of my life in peace here. Until you got in the way. Hello brother, my mind is the last place you should want to be. There's no soul from this Earth that hates you like me. I wanna free them from you, they all fear you, one fate you should hate, but were eager to accept. And so, brother, you'll have to die next."

Lovell2004

@Doros70
            It'll end about as well as Jeff Keaton and David Keaton's last encounter. Well, actually worse because It'll be just as brutal and most of their brotherly love will be gone. Plus, It'll likely be easier to feel bad for Liu since...well, since he's not a crazed rapist who sets up explosives across a town full of innocent victims just for pleasure.
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Doros70

@Lovell2004 
            I'm guessing it won't end well.
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Lovell2004

@Doros70
            For a brief time period, yes.
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Lovell2004

Well...I ran into a weird FNAF movie fact today. Apparently the movie already has a novel adaptation, which was kinda weird to hear about because...well, I know why I wanna adapt the movie's story, but I can't really see why Scott wants to. I mean...he already helped write the movie. And I haven't seen anyone review the novel yet. Don't know if it's meant to fill in plot-holes or answer questions the movie didn't cover. I don't know what to think about that. Don't get me wrong, I'm still gonna check it out when I can either by it myself or someone makes an audio version of it for YouTube(Like someone did for The Silver Eyes years ago), I'm just saying I didn't expect this.

Lovell2004

FNAF Crossover Update:
          
          Hey guys. I've thankfully gotten more written for my revamp of Security Hire today and plan on doing more later when I'm done with some chores...which are much harder than usual with how frigid this week has been. But I want to throw some "food for thought" for you guys(By which I mean the two readers who regularly review my stuff) while I wait for my next moment of down-time. So I've been thinking about who I'd want as voice actors for certain characters of my crossover was more like an audio drama series like The Morgue Files. I'll list the matches I've made below. Keep in mind that some actors would play multiple people:
          
          David Near:
          Henry Emily.
          Masky/Hoody.
          Original Freddy.
          Laughing Jack.
          Slenderman.
          
          Brigitte Near:
          Clara Afton.
          Charlie's Aunt.
          Betty Burk.
          Sarah Emily.
          Circus Baby.
          
          Jenna Ortega:
          Jane Mara.
          
          Markiplier:
          Mike Schmidt.
          
          Victoria Pedretti:
          Charlie Emily.
          
          Troy Baker:
          Jeffrey Hearse.
          
          Penn Badgley:
          Ticci Toby.
          
          Jeffrey Morgan:
          Clay Burk.

Lovell2004

@Doros70
            "Told ya he'd chicken out."
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Doros70

@Lovell2004 
            "You're one great big BASTARD disappointment."
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Lovell2004

@Doros70
            "Ooooh! Hell spat him out!"
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Lovell2004

Hey guys. Just wanted to let y'all know my little break from Remedy Trials and Party Of Five stops today. Believe me, it's not because I've gotten less angry about those family secrets I mentioned before. But it's gotten to the point where I can separate that anger from my projects. By which I mean I can write about deaths and trauma for my characters without being tempted to commit crimes that might get me locked up. Or killed by the state. Quite possibly the latter since, while the victims here would deserve it, my actions would still be premeditated and ruled First Degree Murder. Anyway...I'll also pretty much be forbidding myself from deleting any chapters from Remedy Trials after re-writing Security Hire. I've been indecisive as Hell and this will be my way of...kinda forcing myself into being more careful with my ideas. If I can't do that with this series I'm writing for practice, things won't go well when I start my novels. As for Party Of Five? I'm still gonna alternate writing them between chapters. That's all.

Lovell2004

@Doros70
            As much as I'd admittedly like to here, I most likely won't. Whatever my sister's abusers have done, I've still got plans that don't involve me going into prison. Still, I should probably steer clear of that side of my family for the time being. I can't think of a lot of "good" ways to deal with them after what I've heard. About the only potential for good I've seen is a potential excuse to ask for therapy and tackle...other issues secretly dealt with.
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Doros70

@Lovell2004 
            Glad to hear it. But I also pray that you never end up doing anything drastic. If there's a way you can make those people pay without violence, that's probably the best outcome.
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Lovell2004

Charlie Emily Poem:
          FNAF: Remedy Trials.
          
          "Tell me, can you see me now? While you were busy serving your crowd. I was busy saving myself. Do all these machines make you proud? My memories appear clear and loud. My brother and me left on your shelf. We played alone until the monster started calling. First death before the others started falling. Taken way too soon, he's not at all what used to be. Shifting in a box, the past is nothing more than just a dream.  I'm powerless to change his fate, but I'll drag his killer into Hell's gate. Five nights of games, five nights of hunts. My work-week joined with old friends forced into horrid stunts. This masked ghost story from the past. The night shift brings me near my goal, the darkest programs of my soul. When the fifth night comes, the lost souls will clap. I'm setting the scene, and I'm Springing the Trap."

Lovell2004

@Doros70
            Hm. Well, I'll be frank with you as well. I've been preparing my crossover since the pandemic locked everything down. Maybe even slightly before. And, well, I've barely made any progress with Remedy Trials. And that's not even the "official" storyline, it's just what I've settled on to give you and my few other readers some general idea of what I'm aiming for. Plus, making matters slightly worse, your series spreads into different states and different countries. My series mostly just happens within Texas. At least for the first half. Much less expansive. And progress has still been awfully slow.
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Doros70

@Lovell2004 
            I'll be frank with you, I've barely touched my Creepypasta series these days. Plus, I've written so much because I've started the series for a few years now. These days, I feel like I'm running on a treadmill. I keep moving, but I'm really not going anywhere. I have an ending in mind for my anthology, but I feel like I still have a very, very long way before I get to that part.
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Lovell2004

@Doros70
            Somehow, I doubt that. You seem like the better writer between the two of us in general considering how much more progress you've made with your Creepypasta series than me.
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Lovell2004

Clara Afton Poem:
          FNAF: Remedy Trials.
          
          "Let me tell you a tale. Pay attention, please hear. It's about murder, and mystery, and everything you fear. We were left in a hole to decay and to rot. Long since forgotten by the creator of this lot. All he saw was an empty room. No more joy, an empty tomb. Left me here to sing all day. To dance, to spin, to fly away. Behind these dead walls, where memories sleep, anger is restless and secrets don't keep. What he once kept hidden will soon come to light. But for the answers you seek, you must survive the night. You'll uncover the truth, but you still won't be done. There's more to be told. There was never just one. Our creator runs free. He gave the devil our due. His next sacrifice may be you."

Lovell2004

@Doros70
            Yeah, Afton's wife will be more important to my crossover's story. Kinda wish they actually did something with that theory in the games. Fleshing out Afton's family could've made him far scarier if done right. Well, that's kinda strange. Your comment dissappeared. May have hit the wrong button. If so, sorry about that. Mistakes.
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