LunarLightfoot

Hey! So I’m currently editing my Shiki book. I’m changing some events in order to improve the story, however, I’m not sure if others find the changes to be an improvement or not so I was wondering if you could spare some time to reread the first few chapters! The edited chapters have ‘(v.2.0)’ added to the title. Some feedback would be very helpful so I’d really appreciate hearing your thoughts!
          
          Don’t worry if you’re too busy or don’t want to reread the book.
          
          Anyway, sorry for taking up your time! Have a great day/night! ^^