Luvallyx

1st chapter is out! I need feedback and suggestions as its my first time writing a book :) i feel like its a little bland and boring at some parts, also i dont really know where im going with the plot right now, i just kinda we t with it. I really need plot suggestions too! Anyways bye pookies 

Delphine2045

@Luvallyx Thank you for supporting me back, I appreciate you!
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Luvallyx

1st chapter is out! I need feedback and suggestions as its my first time writing a book :) i feel like its a little bland and boring at some parts, also i dont really know where im going with the plot right now, i just kinda we t with it. I really need plot suggestions too! Anyways bye pookies 

Delphine2045

@Luvallyx Thank you for supporting me back, I appreciate you!
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