MHH759

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HotRose-Writes

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DestructiveParasites

hey^^

DestructiveParasites

@MHH759  I can relate to that
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MHH759

@Crypticmessages247 its been quite a rocky road for oc writing but other than that, I've been taking it easy
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DestructiveParasites

@Crypticmessages247  Awesome so what have you been? also how goes the OC writing?
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MHH759

Hey, I hope all is well with all. I would like to know who would like to proofread my document of one of my oc's backstory/origin. I'd like to get comments, critiques, suggestions and/or thoughts on the doc and I would surely be grateful to look over them.
          
          https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PjuQJ7Pli4RRFQNEMQ4uO5T5NOT_W3YKh5f5XO2wuIw/edit?usp=drivesdk

DestructiveParasites

@MHH759  alright here's a Critique After those 2 small paragraphs you wrote there's one big  with no spaces  In my opinion you should put more space  in the one with the big paragraph because if you don't it can be hard to follow along For people that can't see well that have medical conditions and just reviewers in general
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