thatlonecat
Heyyy I m writing something for the first time and I would love it if u give it a read once and lemme know if any improvement is needed ❤ 50 Shades of teenlife #youth.. http://my.w.tt/UiNb/MYOnu13ycw its gonna be an interesting trilogy.. Pls do share it too.. Tysm ❤
Makailah09
@christine_618 Hey, I've just been reading your book. It's good, it really is. It's not your typical style and that just overall adds to the whole concept of your story. I think personally it just needs a bit more context and life to it than just pure thoughts. Like recalling events or thoughts as an event happens kinda thing.But honestly you're doing great, it's great so far. It would be great if you could give my books a reading and if you see anything let me know :D
