Out of Place || Sun/Moondrop x MHA - Which description do you prefer?
- Hey guys, I'm in a little bit of a controversial situation with myself for how I want the description for this book to be... so which would/do you guys find more alluring?
Which version would pique your curiosity more making you want/interested to read this book?
1) When something goes wrong during one of Gregory's restarts a certain someone ends up getting glitched through the code ending up in a new universe where the people there don't seem to be bothered by his odd appearance. However, there are still tons of struggles both emotionally and physically that he will need to overcome to be able to hopefully get back home.
Will Moon be able to find his way back and avoid getting into too much trouble?
and what happened to Sun?
OR
2) There were so many differences and changes that I just couldn't understand. They had no logic behind them, completely to the mind unrealistic, straight out illogical. I just had so- too many questions about all this. What had even happened before I got here? How did I end up here? What or who even made these unreal "upgrades" in the first place? Why? I'm in the practical trash anyways. a-and... Where was sun? why isn't he answering?
A single tear rolled down my metallic cheek as my eyes bored into the mucky pavement I sat on.
"Will I ever be able to return home?"
> So which version do you guys prefer? make sure to let me know!
(also please let me know if any grammar needs fixing and/or I should remove anything that could be too revealing, thx.)
