MayaNotMia

Can you guys teach me how to say goodbye? Cause it’s hard to Take A Break from writing, you could say that I’m trying to write my way out. Your guys wouldn’t have to Wait For It for to long, cause the next few chapters will be out soon. You guys are probably wondering What Comes Next, But by the end of the book, You’ll be Satisfied.

MayaNotMia

Can you guys teach me how to say goodbye? Cause it’s hard to Take A Break from writing, you could say that I’m trying to write my way out. Your guys wouldn’t have to Wait For It for to long, cause the next few chapters will be out soon. You guys are probably wondering What Comes Next, But by the end of the book, You’ll be Satisfied.

MomaSushi

Hey! I have a suggestion for your works. Before I say it your stories are absolutely amazing! They are full of colour and you really feel as if you step into the anime world when you read them. However I find it’s a tiny bit confusing when somone is talking... maybe you could state who is talking? Or when the point of view changes you could put it on a new line with the characters name staying who said what. Apart from that keep on writing! You have an amazing talent so don’t stop!

MayaNotMia

I've been planning on trying to edit the POV in the beginning in middle, and thank you for the feed back. That you for the suggestion! I'll definitely edit the lines soon.
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DelilahHartmen

Squeee I've been followed but this personnel >:P also question any good fmab or FMA books to recommend

MayaNotMia

Guilty by @Tuff-Stuff, Human Again and anything by @SmuggleMuffin
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DelilahHartmen

i mean this person
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