@LenahSadiki@Nandi_books hei, sorry for the late response dear.
You book is coming along just fine. We all make mistakes as first time writer's but we learn along the way. But for a first time writer - you are doing pretty well in terms of grammar.
And also, you can showcase your work on Facebook too to gain more followers. And trust Facebook readers to uplift your spirit and make you grow. Have you ever considered on writing on other platforms?
Also love Mphakamiseni can you please update asseblief, ngyiyagu'cela,ngiyag'kopah
See u even making a coloured girl ask in venec without herself knowing if the spelling is correct I'm embarrassed but I'll do anything plz ek vra wee asseblief