@ocesasam Hi dear, just finished your story. I don't know much about BTS. During quarantine, I watched some of their videos. That's it. So, I don't think I'm able to give a proper feedback. So i just want to tell my opinion.
The story is pretty nice. The way you explain their characters & gives importance to each of them is really great. Army would surely love that. I loved Yena character's boldness & confidence. You nailed it. Story narration is amazing. Keep writing❤✨