Miarowland101

Give me some new ideas for my latest story dm me on Insta @f0rg0ttencastaway 

Patton_loves_cookies

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Miarowland101

@Patton_loves_cookies awwww thanks so much imma check out your books rn (if I haven't already) <3
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Patton_loves_cookies

You have a real talent for writing I hope we can talk more.
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cat-donkey

Hi!
          i just read ur book and i think it's really good! Some of my advice would be to-
          - Try to make chapters longer
          - Do some paragraphing, it can be a bit confusing if you don't.
          - Check your punctuation, sometimes it can be a little bit off.
          - Try not to change POV so often, it can get very confusing for the reader.
          
          Other then that, I think ur books really good!
          
          -Donkey & Cat ❤️

cat-donkey

@Miarowland101 all g (it’s a great book) 
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