Mightyeagle2091

new little teaser
          	
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          	I caught the staff of her weapon with my free hand, finding it melting into liquid. I was thrown forwards now something ramming into my back, but I only stumbled a bit, using my axe as support. 
          	
          	I threw my axe up into the air, before wheeling around. I caught my axe with my other hand and brought it down on just a shadow. I didn’t hit anything, only a loud crash made a sound, and the air seemed dense with dirt. 
          	
          	I smiled “I like this girl~” I said to myself. 
          	
          	I pulled out a Ten of clubs and a Five of Clubs. Throwing the two cards into the air, now combined, they whirled around me. The dirt was thrown around into a tower around me, the wind starting to howl.
          	
          	“What the hell?” she sounded amazed.
          	
          	I smiled gleefully as my bunny ears twitched and turned to my left side. I jumped out, passing through a thin wall of dirt. Bringing my axe up, she seemed surprised. Trying to block my attack she brought her weapon up, I think a sword. But as I crashed down on her sword, the ground itself underneath her gave way. 
          	
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          	Also I think the newer version I have of this is turning out much better than the previous drafts I did.

Mightyeagle2091

new little teaser
          
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          I caught the staff of her weapon with my free hand, finding it melting into liquid. I was thrown forwards now something ramming into my back, but I only stumbled a bit, using my axe as support. 
          
          I threw my axe up into the air, before wheeling around. I caught my axe with my other hand and brought it down on just a shadow. I didn’t hit anything, only a loud crash made a sound, and the air seemed dense with dirt. 
          
          I smiled “I like this girl~” I said to myself. 
          
          I pulled out a Ten of clubs and a Five of Clubs. Throwing the two cards into the air, now combined, they whirled around me. The dirt was thrown around into a tower around me, the wind starting to howl.
          
          “What the hell?” she sounded amazed.
          
          I smiled gleefully as my bunny ears twitched and turned to my left side. I jumped out, passing through a thin wall of dirt. Bringing my axe up, she seemed surprised. Trying to block my attack she brought her weapon up, I think a sword. But as I crashed down on her sword, the ground itself underneath her gave way. 
          
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          Also I think the newer version I have of this is turning out much better than the previous drafts I did.

Mightyeagle2091

The two previous teasers i posted are now outdated as a newer draft has been made. Although now i have a greater concept of the overall story i want, alongside the characters inside the story. Although the very little you have seen such as this… Rabbit and Vanguard Two are still there. Hopefully the changes I am doing result in a better outcome.
          
          With the new guidelines coming to Wattpad it is likely that the version of Pure pure downfall uploaded to here will be a lite version with the more intense elements removed or otherwise hidden. It is likely the true version will then be uploaded to AO3 since it seems to allow more graphic elements, although with proper warning tags. 

Porsche-san

Btw do you know of the upcoming Guidelines update that is now being called the Wattpad Purge because of its targeting to remove the majority of stories? Like anything with Bullying, Death and sexual relations (Possibly More) between underage characters. I was only informed earlier. And it is concerning best save your stories in other sites now, it's coming in the 15 if you're western 16th of April.

Mightyeagle2091

Most likely on AO3 for the more harsh version if I do so
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Mightyeagle2091

I have thought of a more lite version of the story where some of the more intense stuff is either off screen or just removed but I’ll have to look into it.
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Mightyeagle2091

little teaser...
          
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          The Ace of Clubs supported the King of Diamonds and enlarged it to the size of a skyscraper. The king on the card seemed to be animate, his eye looking down at that Vanguard type. He moved out of the card, wielding a massive axe in his hand. The Vanguard type seemed scared, but it didn’t matter, as the king raised his weapon.
          
          “Execute” I commanded.
          
          “No! no!” the Vanguard type screamed
          
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Mightyeagle2091

Teaser initiation sequence 
          
          Rabbit POV
          
          The battle was raging in the city. Giant trees made of stone the size of skyscrapers were standing tall all around. I could tell the other girls were having a hard time, those stone trees were… collapsing and trying to drag them into the ground. This guy… was just nuts; I have to finish him fast. 
          
          I saw him below me, on the ground holding the hilt of his machete… he was playing with the latch that secured it. He stared up at me, his white mask with two large yet soulless black eyes looking up at me. He fought intensely with the others yet he hesitated and fought less seriously with me, was it my strength that scared him? I was told that he was a cold killer, yet-
          
          He jumped at me- no! That was stone beneath him, raising him up. He must be getting serious!
          
          He jumped at me off of the stone, raising his blade, for a strike. Yet in that moment, that split second I felt his… hesitation… but he brought his blade down on me
          
          the same blade… 
          
          that has slaughtered twenty-five magical girls.
          
          Just what is your goal?
          
          “Vanguard two!” 
          
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          “Pure pure downfall” is under development 
          (Current name is liable to change)
          

Mightyeagle2091

There is a chance that I will be coming back to writing, with an original story, however that is a chance not a complete promise.

Mightyeagle2091

@Porsche-san I mean i hope its current name "Pure pure downfall" sort of conveys it, though it is liable to change
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Porsche-san

@Mightyeagle2091 Yeah same. Original stories just hit different compared to fanfics, also I'm now triple interested in that story since I am bogged down on my own dark story. I'd take inspiration from yours, though it won't be a carbon copy of your work. Looking forward to it
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Mightyeagle2091

@Porsche-san I will say I do like making fanfic but there is a satisfaction behind making an original. I plan to start releasing chapters after I have 10 to 15 of them completed, however I should warn it is going to be dark enough that it warrants to have a disclaimer at the beginning.
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Mightyeagle2091

So if you haven’t been following the stuff on fan fiction.net and archive of our own, Mightyeagle has left writing fanfics due to his religion. Though I have taken control of his accounts with writing fanfiction, as I’ve received permission from him.