MiniDragonRen

Hi again! I'm finally editing The Girl with the Changewing Cloak and I wanted to ask what your thoughts are on the first person. I'm strongly considering changing the pronouns from the first person to the third as I go through. This is because I personally find it harder to enjoy a story in the first person, and my friends seem to agree. What are your thoughts on this?

MiniDragonRen

@browhal1 that's a good point, I'll be sure to fix that when editing tysm!!
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browhal1

I’m cool w either. The only thing was it was hard to know for certain if the ???’s point of view was a boy or girl for a little bit
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MiniDragonRen

Hi again! I'm finally editing The Girl with the Changewing Cloak and I wanted to ask what your thoughts are on the first person. I'm strongly considering changing the pronouns from the first person to the third as I go through. This is because I personally find it harder to enjoy a story in the first person, and my friends seem to agree. What are your thoughts on this?

MiniDragonRen

@browhal1 that's a good point, I'll be sure to fix that when editing tysm!!
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browhal1

I’m cool w either. The only thing was it was hard to know for certain if the ???’s point of view was a boy or girl for a little bit
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MiniDragonRen

Hi guys!! After ages of not being active on Wattpad I'm starting a new book! The first part it already up hehe
          
          It's called the Dragon Games, and I've copied the summary below. It's an au with a Hunger Games style event occurs in the httyd universe. I'd appreciate it if u guys had a look! Love you either wah though hehe ❤
          
          The summary:
          
          Every five years, the adolescents of the archipelago are sent to an island filled with ferocious dragons. They must survive the elements, the dragons and - of course - each other. Only if they last a month on the island can they be allowed home, now considered real vikings.
          
          Hiccup Horrendous Haddock the Third has been dreading this day for years. Without friends, strength or endurance, there's no way he can survive the dragon games. Especially with the obvious rigging by Alvin the Treacherous.
          
          All too quickly, Hiccup finds that it's time for the dragon games. 
          
          What will Alvin the Treacherous do?
          
          Can Hiccup survive the games?
          
          What will happen when the night fury attacks?

Whiplash246

@MiniDragonRen ooooooh this looks so interesting yay!!
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ZoeNightshadeInStars

Sounds exciting! I’ll check it out!
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Razorwhip_queen2

If you were killed, I wouldn't be at your funeral.
          
          I'd be in jail for killing the person who killed you.
          
          We are true friends.
          
          We ride together, we die together.
          
          Send this to everybody you care about, including me, if you care.
          
          I want you to know you are an amazing friend, till death and forever.
          
          If I don't get this back, I understand.
          
          But I have a game for you.
          
          Once you read this letter,
          
          you must send this to 15 people,
          
          Including me.
          
          If you get at least three back, you are loved.
          
          Nobody knows how important something is, until they lose it.
          
          Tonight (right at 12:00 am), the person you love will realize they love you.
          
          If you break this chain, you will have bad luck.
          
          With love, send this to the 15. If you don't you will turn ugly one year.
          
          A friend told me to do this, so pass it on.
          
          Tomorrow, two boys/girls will ask if they can have your number.
          
          Send this message to 15 people of bad luck starts for a whole year.
          
          This is not fake.
          
          Apparently, if you copy and paste this, you will have the best day of your life tomorrow! 
          
          Good luck!
          
          -Razor

MiniDragonRen

Hey guys!
          Woah. It feels as if it's been ages since I was last properly on Wattpad. The design has changed, which is awesome, but I am behind.
          I plan to, in the half term, write as much as possible and to catch up on everything I've missed.
          Side note: the third How to train your Dragon film is amazing!! 10/10 would recommend.
          I wanted to say that I am back, and hopefully going to be able to use new motivation from the third film to write more fresh, developed chapters.
          ~ MiniDragonRen 
          P.S. I may need to add Marvel to my fandoms as well... (oops?)

MiniDragonRen

@Whiplash246 Thanks! Enjoy the movie ❤
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Whiplash246

@MiniDragonRen ooh i cant wait to watch that movie! I plan to watch it this half term and I'm so EXCITED
            Have fun with ur writing! Looking forward to ur chapters :)
            Also, Marvel! Whoop, WHOOP!
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GamerHal64

If you were kill, I wouldn’t be at your funeral.
          
          I'd be in jail for killing the person who killed you.
          
          We are friends.
          
          We ride together. We die together.
          
          Send this to 15 people, including me, once you read this.
          
          ❤️If you get at least three back you are loved.
          
          Tonight at 12:00 a.m., the person you love will realize they love you.
          
          Then at 1:00 a.m. and 2:00 a.m., be ready for the shock of your life!
          
          If you break this chain, you will get bad luck for a whole year. 
          
          ~Gamer

MiniDragonRen

Tagged!
          This is the first time I've been tagged, so it might not be quite right.
          Thanks @GamerHal64 and @Whiplash246 for tagging me!
          So ten things about myself:
          1) I've recently been watching Sherlock (and I might need to add it to my list of fandoms. Oops?)
          2) I have an adorable dog that always tries to steal my food
          3) Sketching is fabulous
          4) My favourite colours are aquamarine, coral and amethyst (especially together! <3)
          5) Ben and Jerry's Cookie Dough all the way! ~ even if it is Winter where I live 
          6) I am a procastinating perfectionist 
          7) My favourite animals are dragons, griffins, foxes, ferrets and otters
          8) Every time I go on holdiay, I bring back pebbles. I litterally have a box full of them. Don't ask. 
          9) I'm planning a new story (it's not a fanfiction because of Article 13)
          10) Wattpad and pinterest are the reasons I don't get enough sleep ~ not complaining
          
          A spoiler? Um OK
          (The Girl in a Changewing Cloak)
          Two people will die soon, their deaths in more harmony than ou might expect.
          
          I think I did this right? 
          
          Tags:
          @Viggo'sGhost
          @RivertheShimmerscale
          @lunadrayerconbolt14
          @LoveLightFuryPL
          
          If you are tagged, please don't feel as if you have to do it! If you aren't, still go for it! I couldn't get everyone on here.

Whiplash246

@MiniDragonRen AH! SHERLOCK! SHERLOCK SHERLOCK SHERLOCK ADD IT ADD IT ADD SHERLOCK TO UR LIST OF FANDOMS BECAUSE SHERLOCK IS LIYFFE AN SHERLOCK IS LOOV OML!
            
            also u hv a very unique and beautiful choice of favourite colours :)
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GamerHal64

If you were killed I wouldn’t be at your funeral
          Because I would be in jail for killing the person that killed you!
          We are true friends.
          We ride together we die together.
           #DragonLoversUnite
          
          Sending this to all those I care for. Didn’t have to but I wanted to.
          
          P.S. I felt this was necessary since... well, I care, and cause it shows I really appreciate you and your book.
          
          -Gamer

MiniDragonRen

@GamerHal64 Thank you, this was so sweet. I am so glad you enjoy the book! 
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