Ashes_and_Red

Hi! Your story was really good, and i just have one suggestion... i feel like it was very short and a longer and fleshed out version of the story would give more perspective to the individual characters and their motives. Like for example showing tanya's pov and why she cheated, aarav's love for tanya and why he did what he did, some secret plot twists (like the psycho turns out to be the boy she cheated with) and more obstacles for aarav and in general making the characters more gray rather than black and white. Otherwise it was a rlly good story!

MitthuKittu

@Ashes_and_Red Hey can you message me privately? I need some suggestion
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MitthuKittu

@Ashes_and_Red and also I could maybe write a backstory of how they got together and why Tanya cheated. If you think it would be good. I think I will write it better this time.
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