M1A1 Abrams Main Battle Tank

@MuhAbrams congrats, I almos5 thought you los5 your account or something lol anyway can’t wait for more chapters on this universe!

Greyhound in particular was the spark I needed. That movie had the story elements and atmosphere I was needing for a long time. I recommend watching it, though it's only available on Apple+

@MuhAbrams Good to hear from you again, mate. 
            
            Anyways, I’m ready to see what your next chapter will offer =)

Best explaination. 
            
            Hope author is alright. He did say stuff happened on his last comment.

@MuhAbrams I'll be waiting for the next chapter in the Steel Titan sequel

@MuhAbrams Yeah don't try to push yourself too hard dude We still here for y'all 

Bro, do what you think is best for yourself. No need to burn yourself out needlessly.

@CalebadmiraCalebThre I guess Revenge against The Sirens because they made a Fake Copy of Amagi 

Back from my small hitiaus
            
            As they say: Revenge is a dish served cold.
            
            And you know what happens when you piss off an old American dude with a giant fortress.
            
            And if you recall to Steel Titan and history in general, that was a lesson learned for everyone: There’s more than just the tip of the Siren iceberg

Eh? What will the plot be about?

@indonesianelf I like the structured criticism, and will be noted  
            
            For number 3 and 4, that would call for me to rewrite again, which I frankly do not want to do for two books... I used the script format to keep things simple (Dialogue va paragraph) when I first started writing.
            
            And for number 1, yeah, it’s a pretty ludicrous design that somehow came into existence. Again, however, it would change A LOT of story elements (Giving the fact the North American class gives way to the USS Conqueror and its arsenal ship variants). Though, I still explained the ships in a (somewhat) technical and realistic manner in an attempt to justify their mere existence (As for my totally qualified ego for designing ships).
            
            And Number two, I preferably like the SCP Foundation, particularly due to their specialization of handling anomalies and even using them. For me, it gives me some leverage for creating the anomalies that are presented in my story while maintaining a somewhat realistic and technical standpoint (Ic, still using science to explain why this happened). And yes, this also would change story elements.
            
            Despite this, I still have plenty planned  

@MuhAbrams Here's my personal and unqualified suggestion :
            
            1. Make USS Manifest Destiny more reasonable. Maybe have only 2 turrets foward and 2 turrets aft. If you want to make them guadruple turrets it's fine I guess since the French did have those. Also, instead of Manifest Destiny, I think you should name them either after US Territories like Guam or after Famous Ironclads like Monitor
            
            2. Remove SCP
            
            3. Don't use script.
             "Haha gun go boom" said a sailor as the guns fired
            
            is better than
            
            Gunner 3 : Haha gun go boom
            
            4. On that note, I dislike naming people Crewmember 5 or radio operator 3. This is where not using script would be better, as you can just write
            
            "We are hit!" A Crewmember exclaimed as a torpedo hit the bow
            "We are sinking" Another Crewmember cried as the ship begins to list
            
            Overall, your stories are interesting and I like them. I just have some suggestions that are based on my personal preferences

@MuhAbrams yes