MyUnstableWonderland

Alrighty, finally posted chapter one of the third rewritten version of Dragon Heart! Please let me know what you think :) 
          	
          	I'm still making sure my information of the world and plot is organized, but I felt like chapter one is something more of my current writing style and the length that I wanted than the previous one. I'm not sure when I'll have chapter two out, but I'll try to get it out within a month at least.
          	
          	Let's hope it's soon though! :)

MyUnstableWonderland

Alrighty, finally posted chapter one of the third rewritten version of Dragon Heart! Please let me know what you think :) 
          
          I'm still making sure my information of the world and plot is organized, but I felt like chapter one is something more of my current writing style and the length that I wanted than the previous one. I'm not sure when I'll have chapter two out, but I'll try to get it out within a month at least.
          
          Let's hope it's soon though! :)

MyUnstableWonderland

Just to let my readers know, I will be doing some rewriting for some chapters in my story Dragon Heart due to dissatisfaction.  I would love to have any readers let me know if I should fix something in particular. Basically, if you read something that didn't quite make sense, please let me know! Or if you feel like my world building needs some work, or maybe I mixed up my characters somewhere. Whatever it is, please let me know! I want to improve the story.

MyUnstableWonderland

Okay, thank you for the input!! ^^
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CountryMama2086

Smoother time period breaks... “after a week - - - -“ or “one month later - - - -“
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MyUnstableWonderland

To those reading my book, Dragon Heart, I would like to take the time, (as I managed to get to over 10 chapters), to thank y all for reading it. I know I take forever to update on a chapter, but I truly appreciate everyone who has given it a read. I didn't think I would get the amount of reads I have now when I started it. Fun fact, the one you are currently reading is actually the rewritten version of it. When I first started to write and post the chapters, I was too excited to get to the good parts which caused a lot of plot holes and rushed writing. I knew that I needed to rewrite it, because I knew that my writing skills were much better then what I was showing the world. So I deleted the book, and rewrote it. At the time of this decision I was hoping to get at least a 100 reads, because although I knew that my writing skills were good, I didn't think they were the best out there. 
          
          So thank you for the love and support on the story so far, and I hope to be able to communicate with y'all more. Ah, before I forget I had promise myself before rewriting the book to never put in a Author Note, and if I did to delete it once the next chapter was out. I didn't want to bombard my book with them. I hope that might explain to some who were silently curious as to why I didn't include Author Notes. 
          
          I hope you have an amazing day wherever you are, and I thank you once more for reading my book.