Mythic-Angel

I have been working on a story "World of Myths" for a long while now. In hopes of that people would enjoy it, I've been constantly polishing this story, but I believe I need more help. May I ask all of you to help me, give your opinion, your feelings towards reading my story?

Mythic-Angel

I have been working on a story "World of Myths" for a long while now. In hopes of that people would enjoy it, I've been constantly polishing this story, but I believe I need more help. May I ask all of you to help me, give your opinion, your feelings towards reading my story?